5th Production Meeting

Today we edited the rest of the sequence, we put the camera footage from Charlies bedroom onto the editing suite and merged it with the voiceover, it ended up sounding really good, and matching well with the footage. It was a lot better than we all anticipated.

We decided to re write the end of the script to help the audience understand what is happening better and also to add to the enigma; we realised that what i had origninally wrote was starting to sound like a poem, and the audience would probably have a hard time understanding the storyline.

"Karma comes back around (a knock on the door) and I can't hide any longer..."
Too this line there is a knock on the door she looks up, worried, and the shot becomes blurry, it gives the intention that someone has come to get her. Also this way the audience are intrigued, and we've left it at a dead end.

I think the whole group were dissapointed with the end shot, we figured there could've been alot more if we had bene more prepared and organised, it's fairly short, but we haven't had the chance to film more, than edit it all.